This is an awesome story and the story line is so interesting ~ ! I really hope you can continue it after all this time.

I'm loving this story, it's so unique compared to everything that I've read before. I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter! Please post the next chapter before the end of summer.

This is a very interesting story line I like how you've made the interactions between werewolves and humans. It's very good please read my name and have a good day

Hey ! Intesresting story you got there. It's just a bi difficuelt to read, because there no sign when you change the point of view. You shloud perhaps make et ligne et something to separates the paragrpahs. Aniway, I'll keep reading :)

This story is really interesting.

That was so sweet how it played out. I'm glad Sherlock decided to keep him; they work really well together. Thanks for posting!

I've missed this story a lot so I am very happy to see an update. You are doing a really great job with this and I look forward to read the next chapter.

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I just got my hands on this fic and I'm really liking the story, the plot and how handled the werewolfs and the interactions between them and humans. I really hope you will not give on it.

But I do have something to say that I hope you will see as constructive criticism. As good as the plot is, sometimes the story jumpes too fast from place to place, and it's really difficult to follow what is going on and who you're focusing as a narrator at the time. Maybe making things more detailed would make it an easier read. The fact that english is not my native language probably just makes it harder to grasp things.

All in all, I really liked it and hope you will keep the story going

I have to say that I'm really not sure about this. In principle it looks like an interesting plot, one I was looking forward to reading but I have a few issues. The first paragraph is slightly incomprehensible to me. You wrote "The new flat that Sherlock had been able to get was cluttered, and close enough to central London that Mycroft would have thought he had somehow liked to the elderly woman who answered the door when he knocked, except she seemed so generally appreciative of Sherlock that he guessed this was one of Sherlock's many clients who had paid him through either an interesting case or later favors, accepted or not." This is gibberish, it is very mixed and unclear, you start talking about how being close to London is something and then veer off on a tangent. Look at your first line, what does living near central london have to do with liked Mrs Hudson, which is also nonsensical? Additionally you use the word cluttered 3 times in the first paragraph which is a little excessive. We get it, the flat is cluttered.

Your third paragraph starts with "As usual, it's to ensure you're safety". You're is a contraction, so you have basically written "it's to ensure you are safety" which obviously makes no sense at all.

Wow brilliant! Uh may I ask if there will be Johnlock? Just asking I am not a shipper. I do like Sherlock and John friendship :) huh John doesnt seem to like Mycroft much. Love the story. Poor John gets usually hurt due to Sherlock. Such loyalty.

I'm confused. Did John die then?

Great update even if it ended with an evil cliffie. Thank You!

I am hooked, I cannot wait for the next chapter.

Thank you so much for this beautiful story! I can't wait for the next chapter. You have got talent :)