Reviews for To Forgive A Stolen Heart |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loving it so damn much |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy crap i have to say this chapter literally brought me to tears you did so well. i swear there be more if this story doesn't have a happy ending but i know you made a sequel so here's hoping :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely story. I'm glad it had a happy ending. I was in tears there for a while. Haha. Thank you for this story. I have to say I was a little miffed at Jareth for his treatment of Sarah when he found her in his bed. Even if he didn't know who she wss, he still could have been more respectful. Lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no. The moment I feared is upon us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the random Bowie references in your work hehe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoying this one so far :) interesting concept. Loved the idea of the game! Can't wait to read more but alas it is past my bedtime! |
![]() ![]() Done! And Done Well! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() The story was marvelous I simply couldn't stop reading and wondering what would happen next you are truly a gifted author! |
![]() ![]() A Stollen Heart? You mean a heart like a Christmas fruitcake from Germany? Try "Stolen". |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the story but I do have a few problems with spelling and the second paragraph you need to put a space between something's and up. Also, soul is spelled soul, not sole. Sole means only, as in "That was his sole purpose." Other than those tiny tidbits I like the story so far. |
![]() ![]() Beautifully done! Bravo! :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy mother of god love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful ending. Thank you very much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Sarah. |