My feels. You murdered them. That is how good your story is. But you're still a murderer.
(sorry for being ott, i'm here for laughs

That was so sad, and emotional. Deep too.
Overall that was very well written and had great detail. I was actually there. Broke my heart since I couldn't help her.
Good job!

this isn't regular show is it...-/-...I feel stupid...

Damn...!

Ugh. Sadly this is a story me and my sister ( ) both like

Im not crule or goth but I really love this story you should make a second chapter

What if this happened to Rigby instead of Milura Kasai? And what if instead of a cave he would run to the same home where he's adopted by his current family' then meets mordecai and everything takes off from there?(SORRY!j-just a thought...)

Yeesh, that's a bummer, though that's an understatement. Great story, nonetheless. :)

Don't be mad at me.

I actually cried.

This story is touching, sad, and amazing. I love it, you are brilliant. That's all there is to say.

This was a good and sad story. Nice job!