Reviews for Apex |
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Malgrath chapter 1 . 7/6/2018 I was expecting Sully to in an Owen Brady stand in, you know raise the attacking raptors and such. |
Chrome Cheetah chapter 2 . 7/2/2018 Awww man! Can't wait to see the Navi get their butts kicked! |
TimberlineWolf chapter 2 . 7/2/2018 interesting, i see you've left the slow burn behind. And the Raptors have camo now? gods, and here i thought the Carnos were scary with that! |
CapitalClassShip chapter 2 . 7/2/2018 interesting choice of Songs. |
Pichicha123 chapter 2 . 7/2/2018 Check format |
Raptorex chapter 1 . 7/1/2018 Oh, um... by the way this directly conflicts with canon. Basically, everything on Sorna, in the timeline, either died or was transported to Jurassic World. You see, all the dinosaurs were dying on Sorna due to the amount of predators and lack of edible plant matter. Unless of course, this ISN'T Sorna. But if you ignore that I can see a brilliant story coming out of this! |
Raptorex chapter 1 . 7/1/2018 So, basically what I'm getting at here is that the RDA is attempting to use the Indoraptor to exterminate the locals of Pandora? And that in order to do so they have to... get a specimen that shows empathy by having it raised by one of the raptor packs on Sorna? And it appears that it is now being raised by the same bloodline of raptors that The Big One came from. Well this can only end brilliantly! |
Quintain Apprentince of Alduin chapter 1 . 7/1/2018 Interesting. I would recommend looking at the DPG website, since it is canon. Nothing in it specificlly counters this story, but it should give you a good idea what the current thoughts on the series are. |
Chrome Cheetah chapter 1 . 7/1/2018 Miss the old awesomeness, what little I can remember, but this is pretty freaking awesome! Can't wait for them to get to Pandora! |
DONOVAN94 chapter 1 . 7/1/2018 Wow, Indoraptors! Got to say I honestly can't wait to see where this goes! |
Pichicha123 chapter 1 . 6/30/2018 Major improvement. That last pwrt was creepy. The indoraptro was with her all along. |
TimberlineWolf chapter 1 . 6/30/2018 huh, very nice start. i like the use of logs. welcome back |
Another S.T.A.L.K.E.R chapter 6 . 11/15/2017 Fantastic story thus far! Without storytellers, humanity wouldn't exist as we know it. For how else war information and rudimentary knowledge passed on, if not by stories? It is an important skill. Keep up the good work, and know that storytellers like yourself help the rest of us through difficult times. |
Thy Pegasus Box chapter 7 . 8/2/2016 HOLY GLORIOUS ANGEL SHIT BATMAN! My GOD this was so amusing to read, I LOVE IT! I dearly hope you continue this. Because it. Is. AWESOME. I Eagerly await your next chapter. P.s. Dragons are fucking awesome. |
Cherrie-san chapter 7 . 3/1/2016 This is awesome! I Beg you to continue... |