hey this story looks EXACTLY like the one named "Pillow Talk" altho..that one pairs Rei and Minako...dude you even use the same frases! I think you copy the work 'cause the other writter uploaded their stoy a year before you! Thats not nice...cheater...you only add the dildo part and the scene with makoto as a bottom... it was good tho

Awww! Sweet! And really hot!

Amazing...

"Lock your office door Ami."

That is my favorite line from the entire story. I love Makoto for that line. When I read that I thought "uhoh...Ami is going to be in for a ride."

This was a nice and spicy story and I enjoyed it. Thanks for writing it!

Why, yes, Mako-chan, you bad Thunder Goddess, just HOW well you've distracted your ever-loving soulmate with lunch. X3 While this fic was certainly new, considering I've NEVER seen Ami being so vocal with naughty words spiced in, I do believe it was a treat. w Very good, especially with Makoto lounging around at home. *laughs* Great job! XD

WOW! A well-written and told stroke story with something resembling a plot... No typos to criticise, but you DID mix up the 'signature' colors of the two lovers...but then again, that's more or less 'canon' and a story like this doesn't need to be bound by 'canon'. And that is the ONLY thing that I could find to criticise. You are on my 'follow' for authors, and this story is on my list as a 'favorite'.

I don't really this kind of stuff but Da-Ham

Nice work.

Childhood: Improved.

Very sweet, sexy fic you have here. I especially love the way Mako help Ami get over her insecurity about her body, not to mention the twist Mako provided at the end. I along with Ami was not expecting it.

Overall a wonderful job. Hope to see more like this from you. Peace out.