Reviews for A Payment of Loss
Hersheykitty3 chapter 1 . 7/21/2019
It's been a long time and probably won't be continued, but please finish it!
Melkyy chapter 1 . 8/31/2018
Very good little story, I love how easily it is to picture the scene ! I'd like to read what happens next, haha !
ilikeREADIN chapter 1 . 3/3/2015
Yes continue!
thetrueolympian chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
Amazing start! This sounds like a great story! What happens next?
lozza chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Carry on :)
sandra3491 chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Yes, please continue. I like your writing style and your plot seems interesting... plus I'm a fan of Lucius and Severus.
Asou chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
yeap you should continue ! Poor Severus is having Lucius as his dom :)
The140Percent chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
Please continue ;D I like your writing style.
WeirdAndAwesome chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
I loved it personally, though I didn't understand the part about arrows.. Don't they have wands?
Continue! :)
kaichrono chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
definitely continuw. this is hot...
Kaychan chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Please continue!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
LOVE IT VERY MUCH!!!MORE STORIES PLEASE!!!(SORRY ,I DONT KNOW HOW TO SAY,I CANT SPELL ENGLISH VERY WELL,ITS NOT MY PARENT LANGUAGE..)
well then chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Yes.
SoulMore chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
FAN!~
AnaCorre chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
Pelease don't let it without a good sexy final! It was going so well!
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