| Reviews for Don't Hide |
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   sweetysm chapter 1 . 6/4/2016 I really enjoyed the story, it flowed nicely. I think ten years were a bit too much, but it fit well with the story! :) |
| Karatekid-Ninja chapter 12 . 12/12/2014 i really enjoyed this, i think the flow between first and second chapter needs work as well as the flow between 11th and 12th but all in all i liked it |
| CupCakeyyy chapter 12 . 11/17/2014 Awww, I love them! Sequel? Please? |
| anotherboarduser chapter 12 . 10/2/2014 I like this story, I think it is well written. But I think Harry's behavior can be explained by the brainwashing, indoctrination, abuse... he was trapped in by Dumbledore and other purebloods. Harry was set to think a certain I am not good except in a cannon fodder way to die (and it is die, Voldemort can use a cutting curse on Harry's head). As for the amount of times Ron tried to break them up, I think that say pretty much everything about whether or not they really "owe" Ron for being their "good friend". I think you should write a sequel, even a short one, to say what would the others reactions be. It would make the story so much better. Although ending at this point is a good place to stop too. It's just my opinion that a bit more and the end would be better. Thanks |
| anotherboarduser chapter 11 . 10/2/2014 Nice, I like how Hermione really reject Ron. |
| anotherboarduser chapter 2 . 10/2/2014 Nice description. |
| anotherboarduser chapter 1 . 10/2/2014 Nice start |
| Starzinmieyez chapter 12 . 10/1/2014 Awww! :'D this was so cute! It's good to see an update :') |
| Kaya chapter 9 . 7/13/2013 Awesome! |
| lyaser53 chapter 11 . 6/17/2013 Well It's time to let the world Know ITS REALLY HARRY AND HERMIONE |
| lyaser53 chapter 7 . 6/17/2013 You did very well...Hermione and Ron just never really worked at all...If it were not for Harry I don't see them even being friends. ' |
| lyaser53 chapter 4 . 6/17/2013 How can she not realize he just told her he was in love with her? |
| Emily chapter 11 . 6/5/2013 I like it! Keep going! |
| Man of Constant Sorrow chapter 11 . 6/6/2013 Well I just finished reading chapters 1-11 and I must say that this is quite a wonderful retelling of Canon, giving the Harry and Hermione the significant other they deserve, a great wizard deserves the brightest witch. I hope you find the motivation to not only finish but to write something new as well, you are a brilliant writer with amazing ideas, It would be a shame if this was the last contribution you made to the genre. Thank you for sharing, I eagerly await your next. favorited |
| pawsrule chapter 11 . 6/5/2013 Wonderful! Glad you didn't rehash all the battle. Nicely written. Sad it is almost over but am looking forward to more. |
