This is such an amazing story and portrayed this Lights stuggle and not just having him magically get over it. I thought it did well to show all of his struggle and showed that it is possible to get past trauma.

I would say this is one of the best stories I have read. I applaud you author on writing such an amazing story.

I know you never finished this story and that it's dead, but you coincidentally left it at a really good place to end. It doesn't feel too incomplete. This was an amazing read, thank you so much for taking the time and effort to write it!

No, you were right. A sociopath is someone who doesn't feel emotion(but can fake it).

Ohmygod this fic was wonderful from start to finish! The plot was clearly well thought out and Mikami being the killer was just... *screeches* I didn't expect it at all and I loved it~ I also really like I you wrote Light after he was released from the hospital, it wasn't super cheesy or rushed, you did an amazing job
The ending was beautiful, I cried when Light buried the phone charms
Thanks for writing such an amazing story, I can guarantee I'll be rereading it in the future

This is a truly fantastic story , I love it

awwww mannn im not into romance at alllllll but this story was cool dude when mikami was the killer i was sooooo shocked good job bro

OMG I NEED MORE!

I FUCKING KNEW IT!

I just realized that in chronological order the first letter of the first names of everyone who has been killed by the Kitchen Killer up to this point spell Light Yagami. My theory at this point is that the killer is either Shiori or Mikami and they are using this particular because it relates back to Light's father's murder.

Watari is cool, best fking butler ever...
quillish wammy i liked him refined, culred cured made a good ham sandwich...
also ive nevver met him but i like his cake, strawberry short cream cake.. yummm...withjh caramel cream and peanut spinkles glazed in raspberry jam filled with strawberries o keep the marbled shortcake moist. ... yummy...

Damn. I was not, at first, too enthusiastic about this fic. The concept was nice but I was a bit put off by the very common manner in which L and Light met and how they praised each others intelligence even though I did not see either of them doing or saying anything that smart.

But it got so much better. Loads better. Lights insanity and emotions were just so spot on. And you got me to cry with the confrontation between L and Light. I'm still really emotional and almost crying, in fact.

So good job. Really good job.

Now I need to read something happy to balance this out, dammit.

I kinda figured out Light was the target in the middle of the chapter..
Luke Adams. Izaya Monoke. Gouki Anahara. Hana Wagu. Toshi Souji. Yoko Hari. Ari Inoue. Gill Deux. Akiko Tanaka. Migumi Nakamura. Ichiro Tamashita.
The first letter of every name results LIGHT YAGAMI...And I think the kitchen killer is light's mom since she killed Light's dad in the kitchen with a kitchen knife..
Am I Right?

I really liked the trick with the names! That was so cool! Good job!

I DO NOT FOR THE LIFE OF ME UNDERSTAND WHY THIS ISN'T ONE OF THE MOST FAVED STORIES ON FF BUT IT SHOULD BE! IT IS SO AMAZING I DON'T EVEN UNDERSTAND HOW IT COULD POSSIBLY BE THAT GOOD! PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SO THAT I DON'T DIE OF IJWL WITHDRAWAL PLZ?! ;)

i really love this story...i feel really bad for everything light had to go through...