Cute story...

Lol!

This... this... too much cuteness in one place... the world will collapse!

one of the cutest stories ive ever read :)

Awww. That is so adorable. Ben was a nice kid after all. How does he change from that to the slightly annoying kid he was in the original season? Anyway, great story!

This made me laugh. Hard.

THANK you for being original, realistic to the canon Ben 10 universe, and hilariously creative. The descriptions were elegant and lovely; the dialogue flowed nice and smooth. I truly enjoyed every minute of it, and I re-read it twice.

Oh, and by the way, pay no mind to Doc Boy. He doesn't appreciate any story unless it concludes with a cliche kiss. I happened to adore the ending.

Thank you for the sweet read, and for your talent.

this is cute. I found it especially funny when Ben uses his father's words without really understanding what he was saying. You have quite a knack for child-speech, too. Good Work.

It was cute but I didnt like the ending. I was hoping it would end with ben hugging her or something or at least making her show that she appreciated his help. I suggest you write a sequel but it's your discion

AWWW... so Cwte... I liked it...

This was soo cute!

"Therw Therw howney, sometimes peopwle have to move on."

LOL...i cracked up at this sentence. Ben is just too innocently adorable -