Excellent writing. Excellent description of Neal, happy and in love and often on the move for the next opportunity. He loved Kate so much, regardless of what we may think or question, we know he loved her truly. Peter was obsessive, wasn’t he! Thanks for sharing.

It’s always be Kate. And I don’t even like the girl...

Love this format, short scenes that make you feel like you're there, connected and intertwined. Made me chuckle once or twice, love this backstory, Neal being this *brazen*

i like :)

hehe I love Neal's personality XD

I really really liked this - great job! You write the Neal/Peter dynamic very well.

It may have been jossed, but it's a lot of fun, and well-written...

Cool look at Peter and Neal's relationship before the series started. I didn't even care that it wasn't particularly canon; it's exactly what I had pictured their interactions being like before we saw what actually happened. Thanks for sharing :)

I loved it! Please update soon!

JoJo