The pirate bits are cool but i really hate your usuk references. Theyre sick.

Omg i love this so fucking much. Jolly good show!

Good action scene mixed in with comedic relief at the end. Good structure in the story plot line and build up.

Amazingly coreographed action and well rounded despite the flurry erupting from the ship. Love the part where Arthur is shooting and doesn't get phased by the situation, especialy the hat part. Also nice job ending with a clif hanger.

Shooting rainbow beams? A fairy princess? 15 love notes and a glomp? Wow... why do I feel a lot of the stuff is from the mornings?

Okay, just read the first chapter. AND IT'S AWESOME! The summary you used was a bit of a turn off, I expected something weird, like Alfred is the first mate and cue the fluff bunnies... I glad you destroyed the bunnies. :)

. U better make anarchy vs the pirate empire or whatever it I'm gonna SUE.:3 T.T U not going to write more of this story?

Good plot twist at the end to increase the intensity of the story. Remeber that a story is like a hill with many climbs and small bumps known as comidic relief that all leads to a climax then ending.

Good start by interjecting action and leaving room for the rest of the story. Descriptive language is used to paint the scene well but try to extend it. Also good use of tension in dialoge to portray battle scene. All in all good start and remember the first rule of writting, theme/motif.

Best chapter ever! Now I know why this story's called All Hail The Pirate Empire!

Oohh a floating China Town sounds like fun!

I'm so glad the curse is over! Really nicely done!

Flying Mint Bunnies and rainbow eyebrow beams!

That last sentence is so suspenseful...I love it! Can't wait to see what happens next!

I liked Arthur's letter to James. Heehee I can imagine him saying that!