Great job! I was wondering if you could make a sequel to this. I'm really interested in seeing what will happen with the FBI op.

I really like the story. It is well written, especially compared to some of the other stories on this site.

:D Did NOT expect that plot twist! Awesome job!

They are like twins separated from birth aren't they. Great job

I really enjoyed this story! Hope there is more somewhere or someday!

I don't predict the ending. Nice little twisted there. I really hope you make another cross over like this. I love Kirk here. He seems so cute and innocent. Thank you

Gix, I love your work. Everyone's interactions are , I'm ready to move to Iowa if I can track them down. Or at least write the .see if they're willing to make another flick based on these. :D Thank you so much for putting these up to read.

I loved the tag team sniping with Ziva and Bones.

Great story - I'm looking forward to the sequel!

Awesome story, awesome read and laughs and awesome ending! Seeing a sequel is in the works makes it even better!

YAY! I was glad to finally see this monster finished! I know its taken you a while, never mind all the real life stuff that's been going on. I'm also excited I got to be an FBI agent. :D and I guess the reason for all the mess in the first place...makes sense. Can't wait to see what else you cook up. Until then. Best of Luck!

Happy Writing

Spacie!

Yay! Wonderful story with a nice little twist at the end. I hope you keep it up in another installment and maybe show Ziva and *Leonard* getting to know each other better! This is one seriously great cross-over/AU that you've created!

You've Done it again Gixxer. I absolutely loved it. It was very natural and well done. Likewise Gibbs and Pike have the same sort of Chemistry as Bones and Kirk. The fact that Pike was as much of a trouble maker as Jim was made me laugh. MRE Bomb? Jesus, I'm sure he gave his CO's a headache I can see the chemistry between the characters going places if you should decided to do a sequel. Can't wait to see the ending.

Best!

Spacie

In my opinion this was the best chapter of all. Of course, I've been waiting for Gibbs and Pike to talk, but this exceeded expectations.

ROFLOL! Gibbs has "Tony-Fucked-Up" Sense! It's much better than spider-sense!

And why is it that I can picture Vance going "brb loling 4evr" to Pike, then leaving the room and practically howling with laughter? -facepalm-

Pike was a prankster? You know that means that you're gonna have to write Pike pulling a prank sometime in the Cop!Verse, just to show that he still can, right?

Oh Lord...Kirk and DiNozzo against Pike and Gibbs at the same time? Pike and Gibbs, every time. And I loved the analogy about the principal's office!

And I KNOW Tony wasn't just so stupid as to actually imply that Gibbs is OLD! He srsly needs an extra Gibbs-slap for that. And a forcible headdesking.

Your Rule 52 is probably the best rule I've heard of. Though you might end up wanting to add an addendum about Scotty not being allowed to be near them both, too. lol!

Eh...MREs aren't THAT bad. We had them after Katrina, and they were pretty decent, and didn't do anything weird to my stomach...though I hadn't been able to eat for a week beforehand, so my guts probably didn't give a damn, either. :P

Anyway, thanks for the great chapter! I cackled quite a bit as I read it! _

Excellent read and even better laughs! Like the MRE thing. You should be writing scripts for the show.