Now racing to go read the sequel

I already liked T'Pau , but now I like her even more since she kinda called the council elders children that still have not learned from at least one of their mistakes. Love that insult that she gave them.
A pity the elders are oblivious to it.

Yay. I'm so glad to hear that you're writing sequels. The closer I got to the end of this fic the more I wanted to at least see how they would be different from the first movie

Wow, this is a great read! I love the whole premise, and the bond between Jim and Spock.

Your author's notes are pretty cool too!

Oh nos! I just had an "oh $h1t" moment when I was reading jim's conversation with T'Pau cuz I remembered Vulcan gets destroyed.

Great fic

Im all for Jim and Spock friendship, although i prefer them together, as long as Spock does not end up with uhura. I hate that bitch. And, i wish everyone would remember that StarTrek is about the friendship between Jim, Spock and McCoy. They were the trio...not Jim, Spock and Uhura as is being shoved to ys by the current reboot movies. I usually ignore Saldana but these reboot makes me hate her so much. Maybe that's why i didnt watch all the reboot movies, except for the 1st.

Well, itsnot your fault you guessed wring with Uhura's age. Saldana's probably in her late 30s to early 40s. She cant play 19. She's too old for that. Even Gigi Gadid and Kendall Jenner who are 21 is not 19. Can you imagine Saldana sitting next to Gigi and Kendall. Nobody would believe she's 19

This is so so so so awesome! I think it may be the best Tarsus IV story I've read-and one of the best Spock/Kirk friendship stories. I loved everything!

Hello I am once more rereading this fic because it's compleatly amazing! Anyway I belive that in "Amock Time" Kirk mentions that T'Pau had refused a pace on the council.

good Story! enjoyed reading it very much!
now on to the Sequels...

Wow, I absolutely LOVE your take on t'hy'la. It is unique among the stories I have read. Most others seem to write the phenomenon as either one extreme or the other - K/S nymphomania or just a basic empathetic connection - but I think your version better represents its "spirit." Wonderful job, and thank you for sharing! Your version of t'hy'la will now be inserted into my headcanon.

What happened to Tilainya? Did I miss what happened to her or did you not mention it?

Fun gact :Beem me up Scotty wasn't a conon quote it was a fan reference to the original series.

The middle of this chapter with the explaination of T'hy'la and going into Jim's being sick was too expository; it read too much like a text book and not enough like a story book. That said with all the conflict and confusion that surrounds the use of t'hy'la I can't think of a way off the top of my head to include that explanation in a better way - because it definitely needed to be included.

The analogous term I always think of when thinking of T'hy'la is Philia, greek for 'brotherly love'. d

I like what you did with the T'hy'la bond. I'm not against slash, but the way you described it, while keeping it's original context, was good. It felt natural, not forced at all, and it seemed really thought out. One might even say logical. Fascinating.
No, but still, I did like it a lot. The definition of it, especially the 'lover' part, made sense to me.