Dude, when's the next upload gunna be? It's been longer than the franchise lived! But I have to say:
The story has a lot of potential;
Spelling and grammar can be improved;
I might be following this story, ok, I WILL be following this story.

Also, feel free to check out my fanfic on Blinx, The Blinx series, that's all, please upload your next chapter, or read my fanfic, both, or neither, I don't mind... Peace out man

S**t son, and jakethecqts story was cool, now I'm caught in between...

This is a very interesting fanfic you're creating. Keep it up.

Pleeeeeeaaaaassssseeee a ch 4!

Hmm, interesting concept so far. I'm curious to see where this is going. )

Keep this story going. Its a good one. Others will review soon. I mean after all, you only published this story about a week or two ago.

Hey keep it going, this seems to be a good one so far, I would hate to see a good story go to waste. Nothing much for you to improve on though, I would say that your grammar is excellent. I know that others appreciate this story as well, maybe there just to shy to review, who knows. Thanks for the chapters you've submitted so far, and keep it up.