im addicted!

Sooooo hot. I’ve read this again and again

I loved this!

I'm revisiting some of your old stories because I LOVE your penmanship and your smut, please write another, preferably epic one...

One of the ScoRose smut story that I loved. Probably best!

I loved how you captured every single tensed, lust and excitement in one beautiful shot story. It's such a well written that I read it for twice (and maybe more, to think I actually put this story at my favorite story). This idea was so original but made me think that how can she exactly give him head when she wrapped by invisibility cloak. Otherwise, it's perfectly, beautifully written without so much dialogue and perfectly describing the exact moment. And I just love Scorpius and Rose character here. But, truthfully, the ending was a lil bit lack. Dunno, it's just awkward when I imagine these two smile at each other in the end, but somehow I felt a lil bit fluff too.

Argh, dunno. but clearly, I love this! Can you come out on another ScoRose oneshot romance smut again? I just love your writing! And probably, I will read your series story of ScoRose when I have some times. Either way, love it love it love it "3

this was fun to read, cheers

great idea and great story :3

Wow.

I really like this story a lot. My only criticism is the mechanics of the cloak and what Rose can do under it. For instance, you describe her kissing his skin while she's still under the cloak, but it's confusing whether she's lifting up the cloak a little to kiss him or if the fabric barrier is there. It's kind of like that for most of the story, where it seems like the cloak would get in the way.

I loved it hehe ;D

That was beautiful. Great job!

I love this story!

3ED IT

Rose is fantastic in this story. I love how she goes for what she wants. This was a great one shot!

I almost turned away at the beginning because I thought it was gonna get a little stalker/creepy.

So glad I stuck with it! Super hot.