So adorable! ;v;

Hey! So I'm not going to pretend I wasn't stupid and had no idea there was such a thing as a VanShion community. Silly, huh? I've been missing out. So I realized that in some strange way my story had been added to this "community" so I decided to check it out. And your story catches my eye. Good thing it did, because I have to say, it was an absolutely great read. First, it's almost funny how I can see similarities in your story and mine. The main thing is that you wrote from Vanitas' point of view, and I'm aware of the challenge. Knowing that, you did an amazing job with this. The setting was pretty cool, and Vanitas was almost the perfect Vanitas! No matter how short, I found myself laughing at "Demon King" and "dancing zombies".

Some lines, like "She resembled a black sheep walking in an area full of white sheep.." sounded kind of out of place, but hey, in a place of such beauty, these things don't really stand out too much, so that's okay. All in all, I loved the story and the end. It was great, especially for a drabble because a drabble needs to be short and sweet. And yours was. :)

That was so cute o

I don't really think it was a drabble, just a oneshot. That was pretty cute.

That was cute.

This was just the cutiest thing I ever read. I wish you do another chapter please...with a cherry on top?

Nice fic! You did very well with the story

So who bullied Xion? Who ever it is there dead! I'll kill em! I'll kill em dead! I'll kill them till they're deader then dead!

I like it. Fluff. Heartless Demon King? Lol. Well, I wish you developed the relationship more before the end.

Continue?

awww that was adorable :3 Simple and not too mushy! nice :) Refreshing.