Actually, depending on the version of the myths, one version is that Hera concieved Hephaestus on her own. I do the same as Percy and try not to think about it too much though, because it doesn't really matter that much. But Hera is also technically Zeus and Hades' older sister, first born from Kronos was Hestia, then Hera, then Demeter, then Hades, then Poseidon, then Zeus. So if you look at it that way, it doesn't matter which parents Hephaestus had, both of them were Hades' siblings.

Really good! Your proofreading is better than mine, which is really good for being in seventh grade when you wrote this. Not that it's a bad thing to be in seventh grade, but it's a good point of reference, and you're much better tha I expect from the average seventh grader.

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow...,...

I don't like how you made Nico straight when he is gay in Canon. It makes it awkward and so unlike him. I really enjoyed this story up to this point and is considering to drop it now.

It kind of makes you look homophobic. Please think of this in the future it's pretty you're uncomfortable with his sexuality, then don't mention it at all. It's a much better solution than this half-assed, awkward and uncharacteristic "flirting".

Nico is 100% hetero?! Where is Solangelo?

NICO DI ANGELO IS GAY! Now if you don’t like “gay” people don’t even think about mentioning Nico in ANY of your stories! OR YOU’LL END UP IN THE FIELDS OF PUNISHMENT FASTER THAN YOU CAN SAY CHAOS! I hate you for saying that and you’ll pay because Nico di Angelo is his own person by Rick Rorden and it specifically says he’s gay so don’t change his gender because you hate or think it’s gross to like the same gender. Also of people support this so even if their not gay themselves (like me) so I suggest you don’t say another word if you hate “gay” or LGBT people or many people hopefully demigods too will come for you and kill you. Now, that’s covered... do you actually hate gay people? Also let Nico be his own people, geez he’s gay now DEAL WITH IT! Thanks for Reading This, Bye... Remember my threat...

Why does he have the shoes? And most importantly, what's he going to do with a pair of stilleto shoes?

Where did Nico get stilleto shoes? More importantly,

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AAAAAAH AMAZING

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH SO AMAZING YASSSSSSSSS

I'm pretty sure Nico can do more than 't he able to make people black out?

I already love it.

Author WritesContains Nico kicking ass."

Me: YASSSSSSSS! LET'S GO!

where should i start? your fanfic is AMAZING, but BUT BUT! you need to read the heroes of olympus series if you're writing about Nico! I thought you did read it when Leo is in there, but the person you made him out to be could be taken as apersonal insult Maybe i m overexagerating but SERIOUSLY you have know idea how painful it is when Well just read the HoO series and youll understand my pain… i wont point out specifics so there wont be any spoilers I understand that the HP series is more popular the the PJO series and HoO and its a good job done describing HP characters. i love your exiting plot. but when putting the to worlds together, everything was ingenious exept your tiny ...misunderstanding in term of how shadow-travelling works. its , and i partly quote strait from the books, a portal, you step in one shadow and you step out another, not you turn into a shadow and shoot somewhere. there has to be a shadow if you want to shadow-travel, and if something goes wrong, you step out of a shadow at somewhere you didn't intend to go; Nico mentioned he ended up in China a few times, and thats been used way to many times in fanfics. longer distance shadow-travelling requires more ebergy, and it bad to shadow-travel to much or to often, see detailed side-effects and such in the HoO series.(personally i think its better than PJO, even though Blood of Olympus , the last book was a little chaotic, but i didn't even notice with so many info about Nico in it the first time i read it.) So basically, awesome fanfic, read the Heroes of Olympus series, i love you in a friendy way, ignour all the spelling and grammar mistakes, and thats it. Thank you!

That was a really good chapter but you SERIOUSLY HAVE NOT UPDATED I S!