Reviews for murderous phosphenes
Is it chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
...wrong if I liked this? Lol the gore was nice a bit more details would have been better. The sick and twisted way he thought was cool but I think maybe a bit more details and a longer story would have helped to really get into the story. And no I don't think your a spycho, if anything I am for liking it lol should make more darkfics!
Cerry-Cupcake chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
LOVE it! You gottaa wright more!
Cerry-Cupcake chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
LOVE it! You gottaa wright more!
DeepPoeticGirl chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
You know, normally i'd hate these kind of twisted fics because there's no happy ending. And an insane Sasuke to THAT degree normally just isn't all that appealing. But like... idk, I like this. I'm a little bit confused by the end there, where she says 'who are you?" but it could be that she just couldn't recognize him anymore. Well, who would, right? lol. It was nice, twisted and seriously fucked up, but very nice!

Though I still firmly believe Sasuke would never truly be able to hurt her... at least, not with her looking at him.

Nice work!
MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
whoa! I totally expected Sakura to think that Sasuke was in love with her, but wow. & YOU LIKED SCHOOL DAYS? No wonder this is so gory! The imagery had me like, super scurry it was so well written.
ecstacyharlot chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
asdfghjkl! I actually thought the one with erotomania was Sakura :I
arabmorgan chapter 2 . 11/23/2011
Naruto is...weird xD Sasuke seems so normal here, hopefully he's not the one in the prologue! I wonder how it all went wrong :O
Joliet E. Bunyao chapter 2 . 11/23/2011
This is interesting. O: I really liked the prologue (Sorry I didn't make a seperate review for that one). It was graphic, full of gore, and just simply amazing. You're such a good writer I'm jealous. xD

You're really good in the horror genre, I think I might attempt and write one soon, but from seeing this-holy crap I don't know if I could even compare to this, LOL. Angst is one thing for me, but horror is a whole new story. I do have a sick mind, but I'm not sure how to put it into words. xD But anyways I'm going off topic but, really. This story is simply amazing, and I was really impressed with your prologue. It blew me away. (:
Durian chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
I liked the little dash inserts, it makes you want to keep reading. The topic was interesting but it was beautifully described. Good work.
Hecate-Aedonaea-Triformis chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
This. Is. Amazing.

I find erotomania fascinating so I squealed when I say the summary of this story. At first I thought this was a one-shot, so I was really sad when it ended, but then I realized it wasn't. This was sooooooooo good.
SasuSaku Forever and Ever chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
I LOVE THIS.

i thoughtit was a oneshot at first and i'm like, "what? o.0 HOW COULD SHE END HERE IT' SBEUTIFUL"

and then yeah. X

i loveeeeeeeeee. this is awfully beautiful. in a sick way. but it's okay cuz i love this nad i love you derppp

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arabmorgan chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
ooh, a multichap? intriguing start! can't wait to see what happens next!
Woofy chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
I'm scared...