Reviews for Flawless |
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HitodeDaikazoku chapter 1 . 11/24/2011 You wrote this early in the morning? Geez, if I tried that it would come out as a ton of gibberish that even I wouldn't be able to decipher. Or a blank page. But this one was amazing! I liked how you explained all the different pedestals people put Yuki on. Now I'm gonna go see if there are more stories of yours I have yet to read! ~Hitode |
topearsXXVII chapter 1 . 11/15/2011 I enjoyed this story quite a bit. A little down that you're not going to continue this, but I respect your decision. Like how the previous reviewers have stated, you clearly showed Yuki's emotions and angst as well as accurately portraying Tohru's caring nature. It was a pleasure to read this! |
marriedtojbiebs chapter 1 . 11/13/2011 I. FRICKIN'. LOVE. THIS. I always wanted Tohru to discover Yuki-chan's sad, sad, past... You should continue this as a multi-chapter, and make each chapter as great and detailed as this! And please tell me what story you read that inspired this, I'd love to read too! |
AssassinedAngel chapter 1 . 11/13/2011 Although I should be working on the homework I keep putting off, I couldn't resist reading this. I enjoyed this very much. I also love stories where Tohru sees Yuki's scars. They're just so beautifully angsty. And I really enjoyed the fact that you didn't make Yuki rant about his past. It's much more in character of him to state the minimum, so I think you captured him very well. |
Miri-chan chapter 1 . 11/13/2011 I as well wanted Yuki to tell Tohru about his past, since that scenario always become so heartwarming. A "flawless" fic, you write as beautiful as always. .~ You picture Yuki's emotions very well, all that angst and no courage to tell anyone about it. Except for Tohru. *~YukiRu~* Wonderful story~ |