Reviews for Flawless
HitodeDaikazoku chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
You wrote this early in the morning? Geez, if I tried that it would come out as a ton of gibberish that even I wouldn't be able to decipher. Or a blank page.

But this one was amazing! I liked how you explained all the different pedestals people put Yuki on.

Now I'm gonna go see if there are more stories of yours I have yet to read!

~Hitode
topearsXXVII chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
I enjoyed this story quite a bit. A little down that you're not going to continue this, but I respect your decision. Like how the previous reviewers have stated, you clearly showed Yuki's emotions and angst as well as accurately portraying Tohru's caring nature.

It was a pleasure to read this!
marriedtojbiebs chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
I. FRICKIN'. LOVE. THIS.

I always wanted Tohru to discover Yuki-chan's sad, sad, past... You should continue this as a multi-chapter, and make each chapter as great and detailed as this! And please tell me what story you read that inspired this, I'd love to read too!
AssassinedAngel chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
Although I should be working on the homework I keep putting off, I couldn't resist reading this. I enjoyed this very much. I also love stories where Tohru sees Yuki's scars. They're just so beautifully angsty. And I really enjoyed the fact that you didn't make Yuki rant about his past. It's much more in character of him to state the minimum, so I think you captured him very well.
Miri-chan chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
I as well wanted Yuki to tell Tohru about his past, since that scenario always become so heartwarming.

A "flawless" fic, you write as beautiful as always. .~

You picture Yuki's emotions very well, all that angst and no courage to tell anyone about it.

Except for Tohru. *~YukiRu~*

Wonderful story~