Reviews for Beating the Heat |
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Guest chapter 15 . 7/26/2019 This was downright hilarious |
Walker chapter 4 . 6/18/2019 Spike start to cry. Spitfire could see Spike was crying on bed. Spitfire was about to leave the room. Spike:Wait don’t go. Spike grabbed Spitfire and hugged Spitfire and Spike kissed Spitfire and Spitfire kissed Spike back. |
JanusOfDuality chapter 10 . 2/25/2017 Twilight picked up the screwdriver with her magic, even though she still had the ring on her horn? When you said it got knocked off Trixie's horn, I think you meant Twilight's horn. Maybe I missed something though. |
Guest chapter 15 . 12/7/2016 Make a suquile |
Guest chapter 13 . 12/6/2016 Wat the heck |
Guest chapter 8 . 12/6/2016 This is soooooooooooo good! |
SSaber chapter 6 . 8/22/2016 Not gonna read the rest of this. I'll get permanent brain damage if I do. |
Meh chapter 11 . 7/20/2016 Enjoying this far more than I probably should... I feel sorry for Twilight though... Dash spent the better part of the day rutting with 4 stallions...Fluttershy has gone through several herself, Pinkie's had her itch scratched, so has Rarity...Applejack is being her stubborn self ( and really Mac? You plowed her friend, where do you get off stopping her from getting laid?! ) but fading fast, and it seems Celestia is going to be setting a record for a one mare gangbang. Give up Doc and give Twilight a bone or two. |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/3/2016 Behold these ponies without any class. A fillie that likes it in the ass |
Fan01 chapter 15 . 3/2/2016 Very funny. |
Rainbow-dash chapter 2 . 1/27/2016 god dammit you added me into it go to hell! |
Rainbowdash chapter 1 . 1/27/2016 you gonna go to pony hell for sure if i,m a part of this! b the way i have a special pony comp. don't ask |
theLadyCheshire chapter 15 . 6/11/2015 Oh my god, this was hilarious. Definitely going to the *special* hell. |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/27/2015 Cool |
Applesoarin chapter 15 . 4/10/2015 Okay I have to ask how old is spike because Id put him in between the ages 2-5 years because one twilight was a filly when she got him and she's like a teen/young adult so he can't count as a baby when he can walk and talk and is being abused I think the kid should go to tharpy or at least tell them he needs to take a break cause he is very unappreciated poor spikey. I really enjoyed the fanfic it felt like it could have been an actual comic from the show when pinkie spoke it felt like the pinkie from the comic and Show which I found really fun to listen ...er um to read it. It was like listening to the song apples to the core it lively we can help but sing along to it, it's got great lyrics and the way it's sung it's amazing the song is in everyone's most catchy songs of altime In some word we're apples to the core |