wow someone in the comments was really pressed tho, dont worry about a thing, sex can be what ever u want especially when it's a fanfiction lmao. I for one, am loving the descriptions.

This started out really good but then got really cringe. Consenting adults then suddenly having dick described as alien intruder, invasion, and getting past her "defenses" is really cringe and disturbing, sex should never be like that. Very unsettling. Even worse was the whole painful sex gush blood thing, very gross and hymens don't work like that, if you're having painful sex something is wrong. By far the worst thing is the whole he dominated her, his cock dominated her feminine... not only a huge turn off but wrong and disturbing on many levels. I don't even have words for how wrong that is. Disgusting.

Ksks

I like it I'm sad that the show ended the way it did. But your story was a joy to read thank you

Good night!
I loved it, great, I love this couple!
I want more, please ...

Please more.

I have read this one a few times and it never disappoints me. This was a vary good story and I really enjoyed it from beginining to end. I would love to see more of your work if possible.

Absolutely I favorited the moment I finish reading this, I even come back to re-read it, it's so amazing. I'd love to read more of these two.

So top continue too write has lot of fun while reading

ah this heat in ur fics... where does it come from... and how r u able to translate it so well into ur writing... this was soooooooo hot

Definitely one of the best I've read. And I read A LOT. Keep up the great work. I look forward to other creations of yours.

Good job. One of the better lemon fics from blood plus. Thanks for a good story.

Love SyaHaji together. One of the most awesome pairings that really deserve a happy ending together. You keep on writing I'll keep on reading.

So perf. His wings opening at the end was beautifully put. I just don't like the fact that he was well endowed for poor Saya. I had been searching for this for sometime now. So glad I found it.

Amazing telling of this story. I wish that I had the ability with words that you seen to have. Kudos and keep up the great work!