This is the most beautiful & wonderfully happy ending ever! Thank you so much for bringing Bella & Tom back together :] I was worried for a moment there when Tom started out with "Mr. Sparrow" (really suicidal tendencies here lol), but then everything ended well :D

I had the most marvellous time reading this FANTASTIC story! I will miss it dearly :):):)

I am pleased to have followed this saga all the way through. A satisfyingly happy ending as promised. Thank you for keeping me entertained throughout:-)

Mrs P:-)

The cavalry arrived in the nick of time:-) I suspect Liz will have a few words to say to her errant daughter...I don't envy Tom his more restricted future and lookforward to being cheered by the epilogue:-) Neatly done, ma'am!

Mrs P:-)

What an amazing chapter! ! ! I started breathing only when I hit the review button. I've been so anxious throughout! I absolutely loved how Elizabeth & Jack made a truly great entrance & saved the day :) It was wonderful!

And I'm SO glad & relieved that there will be an epilogue! I would have cried myself to sleep if you ended Bella & Tom story at such a BITTERsweet note :]

Wait. By epilogue you don't mean an actual last chapter or anything like that? *_* I will miss this story SO MUCH :[

You writing flows so well. It's so much fun to read!

OH I love this! I love that Bella & Tom are working together. They are SO wonderful both a couple and as a team :]

And you Teague was FLAWLESS!

I can't wait to read the next chapter! WHERE IS IT?

Quite comforting to think of backup from such a family; not a lot would stop them acting on concern for their daughter:-) But will they get to the Mary Sue ( name still amuses me) in time? Nicely done :-)

Mrs P:-)

Bella as bodyguard? You could do worse than a pirate girl in that position :-) And will Teague help out in the hunt for his grand daughter?

Mrs P:-)

"I wish my father were here" - Awww I'm sure Jack would be moved to tears upon hearing these words :]

That was a fantastic chapter & I'm on the edge of my seat, dying to find out what will happen!

& YAY! for fast updates! I can't wait! :D

Nononononononononononono Have you been taking classes on how to drive your readers crazy with your chapter endings? ? ? *runs around in circles screaming*

I do feel somewhat hopeful though, that if there was anyone who could find a way out of a such a predicament, it was Bella Sparrow!

Great chapter! :)

& Of course you're going to update tomorrow, right? RIGHT?

I reckon Clara would enjoy a bit of intrigue. The plot thickens:-)

Mrs P:-)

"Of all the things in this wonderful world that I am known for, my patience isn't one of them, savvy?" - Nobody's perfect, after all, not even Captain Jack Sparrow

But why am I speaking of Jack when there is so much more going on? lol

"If this be madness, I should forever want to be without my mind" - OMG Do you realize that this may be one of the most romantic, beautiful sentences EVER? It's absolutely beautiful AND brilliant. I'm in love with this sentence.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh dear. And I just realized that at some point Tom will have to deal with Jack. I'm pretty sure he has no idea what's in store for him hahaha

I am quite taken with Clara, distracted by all the strong young men around her. It would also seem that Bella may well not wish to be found by her parents, just yet:-) Plot does not seem too wildly out of control, yet:-)

Mrs P:-)

lovely story, hope you update it soon

AH Why do you have to scare me so? His fate sealed? Destiny beyond control? These are VERY SCARY CONCEPTS! *pouts* lol

I loved this chapter. It was wonderful. Both Bella/Tom & Elizabeth/Jack have such great dynamics.

"Why couldn't she stay small and easily kept from danger" - Aw Jack, seriously? YOU of all people are wondering why she can't be kept from danger? Parents are a hopeless nation haha

UPDATE SOON! :)

Nicely done:-) Did I mention I love the name of the vessel! And after Liz's "disguises" in the film, it was refreshing that Tom saw straight through hers:-) Though he now has some explaining to do re. cabin boys. I also liked the tables turned so that Elizabeth was the one reassuring Jack. An entertaining chapter, thank you,

Mrs P:-)