Oh my godness! First chapter and I'm already laughing like crazy! Alfred is so naive thinking everything is free...

I love this story so much! I've read it about ten times already and it never gets old.

Noo dear Mattie he liked Ivan's torture! Those hamburgers sound like a disgrace the way you describe them.

Hmm.

So Mathew and Alfred are summer while Ivan is winter?

Well, so Alfred was stupid and Ivan put a little something on Alfred to know where he is. Really, as american he should have thought about that.

Awww~! Now my symphaty tends to Ivan. How did that happen?! I mean he hurt Alfred, but Alfred hurt him too...And General Winter controlled him...

Oh no...Alfred doesn't know what 'punishment' means...

You are awesome! No other way to describe someone, who is able to write such an incredible chapter.

By the way I liked how you were almost non-chalant of how Ivan prepared and entered Alfred for the first time a few chapters ago. Others put way to much focus on it. Good to know you won't get lost in smut. The plot survived the lemon just fine :)

(Really, that's something nearly unseen. At least to that extent you managed it. The perfect balance.)

And you may have guessed, but nope I am not really a fan of pwp. (I think the how it get's to it and how it goes on after is just as interesting. Sex is part of a relationship, but it shouldn't be the relationship)

The worst torture for america: A messed up burger :D

Alfred is great!

Oh no. Alfred has no idea what he did.

Oh my, being manipulative, is he? Really Canada isn't as innocent as everyone thinks he is.

(How can he with Francis as his parental figure?)

Godness so this is the end of part one huh... btw the teaser is really...a teaser, a cool one until yao popped there saying aru lmao.

whatt you live in japan? ohmg thats so cool!