Im literally 16 what the fuck am i doing with my life-

Oh i really ship Liana and Jeremy but I'm not trying to be a hater,i just think that their conversations are a little too familiar. Maybe they could take their time. But i really appreciate your writing skills and style.

This isn't nonsense at all! It's really funny and sweet! Nice job

did you make up these songs? pm me ur good!

Lol, I love this part: "Sure! - Liana turned to Jeremy's twin - You'll hide behind a rock and start play the guitar, Jeremy will be on top of it and when Slyder arrives... BAM! - she clapped her hands once, making Ian almost jump in surprise. That was so sudden!" Lol at Ian getting startled. Poor guy.

And this part was awesome too: "So I had to grab Ian and force him to jump onto his horse because the thought of going to rescue Alexa didn't even cross his mind" That's totally something I'd imagine Ian doing. You jerk.

Anyway, great chapter, Ceci! It was really funny. :)

Aw, this is so cute! I love how Liana calls him "Jerry" and how annoyed he is at that. And the song, it's wonderful! Very romantic. And ugh, Ian just HAD to interrupt them. Now I know why they ran off to some place to get some privacy, lol.

Lol, I totally forgot about this. Sorry about that.
Anyway, I loved that they're finally alone! Alone for some kissing. Oh yes. Me likes this. A lot.
And lol, I bet Alexa and Ian were busy doing their own business, so Liana and Jeremy don't have to worry about being ditched.

Going out with a bang! ;D Love the ending!
Great story! :D

Who things this song? Usually you tell us, unless it's obvious like with 'I Run to You' or one of the many Beatles ones.
Anyways, I'd love to know how they don't get lost in the castle. Lolz. Love the kiss though. Finally they got to do that! Makes me happy. Awesome finish, girl.

Dancing to "I'm Happy Just to Dance With You"? That's too cute. Ian's adorable when he says that this time he's serious about the girl. But he shouldn't have interrupted! And I still don't like that nickname for Jeremy. Lolz. That's just my opinion though.

*sings 'I Run to You' while reviewing*
Goodness, I love that song. Hillary and Charles are wonderful- Dave too, lolz!
Liana's so cute when she starts singing the chorus, although I think Jeremy could have started at the beginning; claiming to run from his brother's 'hate'. Lolz!
Adorable. Bravo, Ceci! Bravo!

they should of kissed and why do the girls hate the boys

I just saw the movie and I have to say that this really fills the gaps in it ;)

Very cool story, love how Liana and Jeremy still deny that they like each other - and love how Ian admits and says that Alexa likes him too :D

And by the way, this FF is NOT stupid! you should continue it, it's great!

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This was probably the best chapter yet :D Seriously, I love the way Ian and Jeremy tease each other about their crushes. It's so cute. Well, the singing part is a little awkward, but other than that, it's great!