Are you by any chance still writing for this? I would love to see it continue.
I think its quite good. But could use some more indication of who is who. I keep mixing up Kevin and Kyle.
Other than this it's quite decent.

Update?
This is amazing!
I wanna see more of Kevin!
Cynthia!

A really nice attempt at a crossover. You don't get carried away and rush plots easily like some people here do. An interesting story, granted it is your first. Update soon. Your fans are waiting.

YES. FINALLY. AN UPDATE. I LOVE YOU. LIKE A FRIEND. A REALLY REALLY REALLY AWESOME FRIEND.
I just forgot if that meant I was the reallyx3 awesome friend or if you were- Oh well, we're both really, really, really awesome!
And uh... Why is the dialogue bold?
Anyway, shortness aside-
EPICNESS! . Can't wait for the next update!

... Wow. Amazing. Brilliant.
UPDATE!

This is kinda hard to read..you should use dialouge in your story, seperate the quotations the characters are saying from the paragraphs.. This is a great story none the less!

I'm laughing too hard to write anything meaningful, get back to you later!