This chapter just makes me cry for Vala. You can really feel her hurt on a visceral level. Powerful writing.

Really cute story. I always enjoy a Vala/Daniel pairing. Great job!

Hah, I loved the twist! Daniel getting pissed that Vala invited the team along. Crossed wires are such a good trope. :D Intense!Daniel is so appealing. Vala's such a lucky girl. I really enjoyed reading this story. Well done!

This story just gets better and better! You write their interactions so well. The thought of Daniel discovering Vala's lingerie was just hilarious.

I'm such a sucker for scenes in the rain. And a bit of angst, especially when it comes to these two. They have too much baggage for things to be light and fluffy all the time. And that shower scene is so smexy and cute.

Cam's hilarious, attempting to bribe Vala with his mom's pies. That's a pretty good bribe, though! And it's hilarious that she won't let the nudist thing go. Hooray for Daniel's appearance!

Awww, poor Vala. The team's got her back though, they'll get Daniel there somehow!

Cute and fun! Great story.

very much enjoyed this. glad i found it on here after all ch.'s had been posted cause i couldn't stop reading it. among other things, i liked how you included mention of prometheous unbound, liked the shower scene and the girl talk in the bathroom. good job, very well played.

Haha, loved the turn of events. Great story.

Loved the conclusion!

I would have to call this a perfect capture by you...and Daniel for finally taking the lead! You had them chasing and dodging in all the right places, even giving the poor readers a heart attack about Vala and her view on the chain of events as she sees it. But I am very glad to see the battle of wills getting to the right page and calling it for what it is. Very well played and gratefully enjoyed on this end! ;)

Really enjoying this. Getting ready to read the next chaptres.

so happy you posted so quickly. I love it to pieces! I wanna squeeze the screen and squeal ... repeatedly. D/V romance and clever fun is just so perfect and makes me soooo happy. Awesome job in creating the fun tension to the end..

That's a rough way to treat our favorite space vixen...and set up by all her friends to boot! In typical Daniel fashion, his off trying to get out of the doghouse in the first round. That was a rough spot to leave us hanging...they certainly deserve treat. Well played! ;)