What a great character study of Jim.

I really love this story. Thank you for writing it.

This is beautifully written, great job.

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really good, interesting style, breaking up the prose with flashbacks but it worked :)

This was so sweet and tender. I wanna be on the crew.

We, loved the story line and the clever format.

This is too awesome for words.

This is good - really good. Thanks for sharing.

Pure gold.

And what an awesome crew it is.

Love your characterisation of Jim.

Thanks for writing.

*clap clap clap* This was brilliant; it really managed to show off aspects of Jim's character wonderfully - also the formatting was excellent:D Well done!

So lovely. Thanks for the read.

Love it.

Particularly the last line. It's the perfect wrap up!

This is a wonderful story, beautifully written. You've managed to capture so much of the essence of these relationships without being bogged down with words - quick and clear, like a drop of water, and instantly revitalizing.

Thank you!

A-MAZ-ING! A really great story, I loved how you spliced the two works together and showed Jim's crew, how they really see him. And the last line was great, I was not expecting it! Great job!

This was just oh-so- wonderful and I loved it