No! Why did you stop writing this... It's too good!

It sounds like D.J. Machale wrote it himself.

Okay, I'm not one to talk but this is just plain weird. it's written well, but makes no sense. Why and how would she have pink hair?! For the most part the Travelers look normal, except for Saint Dane. I highly suggest that you rewrite this story and make it more realistic.

Hobey-ho,
vita di pasta