ichiruki and chadrin. you win!

This was beautifully poetic. I actually JUST remembered the original characters and story lines, so lost was I in your characters and story. And for a non-native-English-speaker-person you do very well. Keep it up!

I love this story. It's very heartfelt and so full of life. Good job.

Gosh. I thought this oneshot was beautiful. I read it before, but then I rediscovered it today and it made me fell in love all over again. Definitely has the 90s feel and Ichigo as a hopeless romantic is definitely there. Rukia, too, has an essence of being a hopeless romantic in her hipster-ish way. I definitely love her independenceness because Rukia will always be Rukia in that day. Anyways, Cheers to your one shot! (:

When I read this, I can't believe that English is not your native language. You write very well. I liked the way in which Ichigo slowly falls for Rukia. It seems very realistic! Great job!

I would have not known English was not you're first language after reading this. It's incredibly eloquent and there's a quality to this fic that you don't typically see, It's refreshing. Love this piece, and thank you for sharing it with us!

Amazing.

This is brilliant. I really loved reading it. I thought it was really sweet. :)

I LOVED it, seriously, you are annoyingly talented. I like that you portrayed ichigo as a romantic, I'v always thought of him that way and Rukia in her layer of not subtle at all and then in her true subtle self was wonderful. Ishida is my favorite character so of course I hung on to every word you wrote about him like they were water and I was lost in a desert (hope I spelled that right). My only complaint is how the significance of certain things was a little bold in places and a little washed out in others.

Thank you for sharing your talent thayet

I love this story. It's so wonderfully true to Rukia's character, all the way through. Because Rukia is an enigma at heart, odd in a almost sort of way and lovely because of it.

The first time I read this story, I really liked it. The second time I read it, I began to appreciate the poetic, lyrical style of writing. And now, after reading it 5 times, I am absolutely in love with it.

It's well-written (obviously) but that's not the main appeal of this story. It's poetic, simple and somehow captures little snapshots of happiness and love. I absolutely love the line you included in your summary, the line about Ishida and Orihime dancing, Chad's line about capturing the world and the entire last paragraph of the story. Actually, I especially love the last paragraph.

It's the type of unique story that gives me goosebumps and makes me feel warm, safe and hopeful. It was a joy to read

this was amazing

I think this was really beautifully written! I like the story's pace and everyone's characterizations. Lovely story :)

I like Rukia she is so cool

Beautiful :)