Hi! I am a long time MBS fan, first time fangirl. My friend has recently pushed me into the world of fandoms, and your fic was the first one I've read.

I have to say that your writing is amazing! I think this fic will be forever next to the actual books in my perception of this series. You are almost as good as Trenton Lee Stewart, I would say, and that is high praise.

The characters, primarily Reynie and Kate, changing so much was a little uncomfortable for me, but I guess I have to be realistic in knowing that they would actually change and I think you did a good job with that.

Kaynie was soo sweet! It was adorable that they are so clearly protective of each other. The kiss was perfect!

It was also very action-packed. The mental effects of the button paid homage to the Whisperer for sure. Good job!

Keep writing!

Sophie

I find this site,
And spend 30 min looking for specifically Mysterious Benedict Society stuff,
It took me so long that I thought it had no fandom,
Well it does,
I've found my people,
And this Story is really good and is well done for a fanficton,
I aplaud you for your work.

lovely

love it

nice.

interesting.

interesting, and surprising that it was surprising for Milligan

like it, you should put it in a pdf to share

good, and somehow get the relationships fixed

no cleo is not cannon and constance would fit better, but you could ty them in together somehow

ERMAHGERD. PLZ MAKE SEQUEL!

I wish I could have been here soon enough to see this story gradually turn into the masterpiece it is. I enjoyed this whole-heartedly! You did a wonderful job!

say something from sophies point o view

please continue story soon!
You could make kate and sophie bffs and sophie not be mad about reynie breaking up with her(which you might wanna do) but NOT find out kate is reynnie's new gf

Well.
I came back to reading this after a long time and it's been finished
Just to say This was great fanfiction and it was so good I keep wondering whether it's canon or not