Waaaaahhhhh please update?

Dude, this is awesome the way it is. I don't mind if you want to change it or stuff, so do whatever you want and I'm sure that it'll still be just as awesome.

I like this please do write more!

i really like this so far. i want to read more of it. please update soon.

I like how you make France not totally dark as a vampire! Though, I wonder how FRANCE would be the first one to screw up in the field of culinary Anyways, you know what "merci" means, right? Because it seemed quite odd that Francis would say "thank you" after being snapped at and having his cooking skills insulted. Unless, of course, he was being sarcastic or something of the sort. If not, however, "desole" would be "I'm sorry" (sorry there's no accents, I don't know how to type them), which would seem more appropriate for the situation. But if he was being sarcastic or something, then it's all good! （）Keep on writing! Ganbare!

this was amazingly good so write another chapter soon, KAY! n_n

Yay! An update! I can't believe Francis could ruin a cup of coffee. It's nearly impossible. I know because I have England's cooking skills. I must have inherited America's taste buds too, haha.

I like the POV like it was before. Switching really frustrates me. Though it is only a minor annoyance. I will keep reading if it is easier for you to write like that.

Thanks for the update.

-Mello

This is brilliant! It has a lot of potential. As it is now though, it's progressing nicely. The writing flows, although there are a few meneal errors here and there, a beta could easily sort that. :D I love it and cannot wait for it to continue- it seems very interesting.

Kali

I like how you wrote this chapter with the switching. It was... what, more personal to hear both of their thoughts?

I like having Arthur's thoughts in the mix too...it makes things more interesting!

I wonder who was Arthur's first male relationship...it sounded scarring...

Creo que podrías especificar con"Pov's Arthur" o "Pov's Francis" o algo por el estilo para que una no se confunda XD muchas gracias por el capítulo! w

I agree with you 100%. Francis would make a sexy vampire. He would almost be like Lestat. In fact a vampire France would have probably been something for Anne Rice to base him on.

This...This was very well written. Im kind of, like fangirling out over here. I really hope to see more! u

WOW! I enjoyed it a lot. It makes me want to write some FrUk right now. Too bad I can't since I'm at school and have no access to my phone. Interesting though. I can't wait to see how this progresses.

Ciao!

~JMS

That was neat! I hope that you'll update real soon, I can't wait to see what happens to Arthur!