"A fish can love a bird, but where would they live?" reminds me a lot of Ever After. :3
I'm delighted with this! I look forward to seeing where you take our Hatter and his Alice

love

u had me up till her mom was a bitch... i'm srry... cranky and pissy or not the poor boy carried her daughter out to safty. she has no right to be a bitch to him.

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Ur awsome i would luv to know what happens now

Oh... crap...
This isn't going to be good for him.

please please please update soon! i really want to read more! this story is really interesting and keeps me wanting to read so please update soon!

I really love the way you write hattter. It feels just like being in his head should. The line about his head feeling cold as especially good. Please update soon!

I love the little peeks we get at Hatter, the little things like the fact that he's good at keeping a low profile, the way he doesn't know things but can figure them out ("she said the word [police] the same way Queen sympathizers said 'suits'" was a great line). Little bits of humor like "his head was getting cold" makes it feel a little bit mad, and rightly so.

I'm curious about Wonderland powers being magnified. Is that something from the original stories, or something you created?

There are a few little formatting and spelling issues, nothing that seriously hampers understanding, but overall this is very good. I hope to see more!

Liz

there are a lot of stories about what happens after alice goes through the looking glass but before she wakes up and hatter comes and they kiss (insert fangirl scream here), but yours is definitly one of the best.

if i may, i have a suggestion for you, to continue the story. all the ones that ive read so far have had alice's mom accepting hatter (or david) very easily. i suggest that you make her wary of him at first (after all, he did sleep in a hospital chair overnight bacause the doctors wouldnt let him in), and have her grow to like him.

well, anyway, really great story! i love it!

I like this! I haven't seen it done this way before. More please!

I love this story and I cannot wait for another chapter. Please update soon. Hatter has to be my favorite character ever.

This story is really awsome.