Oh come on you just can't leave it there what scrappy ending.

What that's it? No there should be more this is such a great story but you stopped it too soon :'(

Oh, this was good. It could easily turn into a multichapter fic!

very great story, sad it ends like this tho, def could of made a great story out of it. i would def come back and read more if u do.

Very nice fic, nice look at the complicated side of their relationship. They both step back instead of getting hurt.

It was soo totally them as characters, I can see them! I loved it I would also live a sequel, they really need to just admit how much they love eachother and get together! But I adore this story more also would be excellent :)

Too bad you ended it there, I would've enjoyed reading more! It was great.

wow!

how could you end it there you have to continue this its going good so far

I really, REALLY enjoyed that. The way you worte it was great; you kept Tony and Ziva almost completely in character, which I think was pretty hard to do with the story line you chose.

If this is finished, amazing job. But if you add another chapter, I will definately read it!

~Evie

Wonderful story!I absolutely love how you write the Tony/Ziva relationship!

I just read it for the second time and I still love it so much! I loved how you balanced the angst and the hotness. My heart broke all over again. Good job!