Interesting episode tag that fills the gap of Marlins mourning well. It could do with a spell check though.

Good story, thanks. And you have managed to make Gaius's potions even more disgusting with "Merlin forced himself to swallow the thick and chunky liquid."

UPDATE YOU BLASTED FIEND!

nice um... it made me want to cry and laugh. Was that what you were aiming for?

I like this. I think how you depicted Merlin's grieving was pretty in-character. Usually he sucks it all in, but everyone has a breaking point, and it was a pretty intense week for him. Nice work with this. I like how you brought in Sir Leon, I'm excited to see where you'll go with this (although, in all honesty, I think I've read this before. Whatevs, it's been a little while in any case.) Keep up the nice work :)
God bless!

That was very good :) I think it was a subject that needed to be addressed and you handled it very well. I'd like to see more of this story, such as when Arthur realizes that being a dragonlord includes having magic. That'd be a fairly interesting conversation to witness, I think :) Keep writing!

God bless :)

I really enjoyed this fiction. Very well written, and I think Merlin and Arthur are in character. It was nice to see Arthur realise exactly Merlin had to cope with!

Gosh, this story makes drinking look extremely undesirable. But really, Merlin need to let some of those pent-up emotions out sometimes, not keepthem bottled-up like that. It's not healthy!

*sniff* This was so good! :') Great fic. :)

A very promising start! Can't wait for more, please update soon :)

aww poor merlin :(

This is good, I'd like to see where this goes; looking forward to the next chapter!

I love this story its so adorable! Please update soon im dying to know how it will all turn out

Poor Merlin... I hope that Arthur can cheer him up!

Rally good