I liked it. Even if I haven't played Kingdom Hearts, I have played a bit of Final Fantasy though. Lea is Axel right? I believe I read that on an info page. Will there be a continuation of this, with Axel saving them?

This could be really good! Please continue it!

Hm, obedience. "I read this".

(I really liked this and imagining Axel bursting in to free Roxas and Xion and running into Reno is fun.)

awwww this is kinda cute! but roxas could've broken out anytime cuz he had a keyblade which could open any locks P

I enjoyed this :) I'm kind of new to Kingdom Hearts, but I've seen Final Fantasy plenty of times. Roxas is one of my favorite characters. I really like this!

Pretty nice and sad ... Oh, if only if Axel bumped into Reno while saving Roxas ... That would be a pretty interesting chapter.

Good job!

I READ THIS AND IT'S AWESOME :3

This was doen really well. I liked how you made Axel and Reno related (because the first time i saw the guy i thought he was Reno's nobody for sure-yah i kinda spoiled for myself, already knew about nobodies before CoM...)

Uwaaah, this was really so lovely! ; A ; ))/ I loved it! You portrayed Reno quite well I think and Roxy to Ahh I just wish there was some sort of continuation or sequel to this dshfvb /flails

Wow, I really like this story. It's to bad that you didn't keep going with it. I would really like to see Reno's reaction to seeing Axel.

Is this a oneshot or is it going to jave mote chapters?
By the way I loved it!

Wow can I request another chapter please? This was really good.

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THE FEELS

Well...this is awesome. I'm now extremely tempted to write a sequel where Reno finally finds out exactly who Axel is...*runs off to Plotting Corner*

That we really cute but now I wanna know what happens next. I was almost expecting Axel to pop out of one of those dark portals and snatch Roxas before Reno could stop him.