Reviews for Spawn |
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![]() ![]() You should write more! I love all your stories. You push all my buttons just right. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I was looking for a good read, and you more than filled my needs:-) You are an excellent writer! Any time you need a Beta Reader and Proofer, please feel free to give me a call. Ping me hear and I'll get the message:-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Typos and such don't matter so much if the story is good. And that was a great story. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Dean, someone always wants him as a suit. The cliffy at that end... WHY? XD Hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cliffhanger! Things looking dark for the boys. Looking forward to reading what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice facty chapter. The lilin sounds like a great nasty. Scary idea that she wants to steal Dean. But then who wouldn't? ;) Still curious about why he's getting prettier though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, of course, she wants to steal Dean! Who wouldn't? ;-) Really enjoying your story and like the use of a new monster (as I've never heard for this one) but wouldn't this be a nephalilim? Isn't that what you get when angels breed with humans or is she different because archangels bred with the human? I can so see Sam getting jealous and not listening like he is in the beginning here. I definitely love how you had Bobby handle it. Very on character with Sam and Bobby! Not so sure about Dean. In spite of the trauma, I feel like he would still be trying to weakly overcompensate and fail miserably. Loved the "atta boy" he sent Cas, though. That did seem in character. |
![]() ![]() ![]() D: Where do u get ur information from? LOLZ This chapter was the best by far! :D :3 lolz I liked Castiel confusing Sam and Bobby without meaning to X3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D please write more please! I really love what u have so far :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() After chapter 1 I didn't expect such a change of pace. Poor Dean lost his va-va-voom and was reduced to a frightened child. It breaks my heart. But I'm sure Bobby and Sam are going to save him. Love to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I definitely want another chapter! I can't figure out what the heck is going on. Is Dean pregnant or did he make the creature pregnant? What was the creature? Succubus or something different? Is Cass around? Can he help? I love pregnant Dean but I don't want him to have kill his child. Yea, I definitely want another chapter. I hate unfinished stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd guess she sounds like a Fury maybe? You've got me curious what the revenge was about, and how/if Dean's going to survive. I'd definitely like to read the rest. |