Reviews for The Burdened Deathcake
BookMaker's chapter 25 . 11/24/2019
It's been so fucking long since I've read over this book. And this is all I have to say...

Fuck U man. FUCK U
rambo4163 chapter 7 . 11/12/2019
AHHHHHHH THE FEELS ARE REAL *desperately tries to and fails at not crying*
Guest chapter 23 . 8/17/2019
why is naruto essentlly a weak and utterly useless in this?
Guest chapter 25 . 7/8/2019
And the stories over.. what a waste. This is one of two crossovers I've found so far that are worth a damn and I havent found a non crossover bleach one yet that's remotely decent to me. Still looking but still a let down.
Guest chapter 24 . 7/8/2019
That bit with anko interrupting is one if the most damned annoying things I've come across. I thought, yes it's not going to be drawn out and I'll get to read it before its dropped. Instead that cliche bullshit and a single chapter left. Fucking hell.
Guest chapter 23 . 7/8/2019
10 days as in 1000 there? Like the reason fugaku is already a vast lord of all things so quickly?

Over all an enjoyable story and a waste it was dropped though. However I couldvenused a bit more of some interactions and break up between the almost constant drama so far.
Guest chapter 14 . 7/7/2019
100x time difference... the fuck.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/7/2019
One thing though is the amount of clones. If he was using kurama's chakra to make thousands fine, but he didnt. He is supposed to have THAT much chakra already yet double or more spirit energy? Cause he clearly must have a LOT of physical energy roo for that many clones.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/7/2019
Amusing. If I had one complaint it would be purely guess work on my part.

Clones from my guess are chakra constructs of the original. Not flesh and blood though and can poof when destabilized. Their fragment of consciousness holding and willing their forms. So if unconscious should dispel. While I agree theres a chance his trick could possibly work and would form spirit clones in that case. The unconscious remains which I guess would be chi should go poof with the conscious mind being shifted to the spirit clone.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/7/2019
I say boo to no hinata.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2019
I definitely have questions about narutos chakra. Considering all the people who's chakra is a mix of spirit and physical energy wouldn't it mean all the shinobi should look like a feast to the hollow as well?

Though the big thing is his soul form coming out older than he is. O get the reason storywise it just doesnt make sense.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2019
I know this is dropped like all the others without a word I'm sure but this: "What's a town Rangiku-san" is ridiculous. They have towns in naruto.
Autobot-Wolfsketch chapter 25 . 5/1/2019
this is absolutely amazing I wish and hope that you continue this story
Monster King chapter 25 . 4/30/2019
Great job please continue
Centipede chapter 18 . 11/12/2018
Dude y the fuck don't u update this
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