*squeaaaaal* I loved this. Your Gill, even your explanation of him and why he is who he is, is perfection. I don't think anyone could've explained GILL better. I believe that he has the most depth out of ANY Harvest Moon character. He has so many dimensions and layers and that's why he's such a great character, and you truly brought that to life here. I can only hope that I can do the same. Thank you dearly for writing such a great story!

I noticed that you've been updating this frequently, and sometimes I click on it just because I like Gill and I want to see how other people write him haha but this chapter was so incredible I had to let you know. Ahhh it's heartbreaking! You handled the theme perfectly. Nice job and keep up the good writing!

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SO AMAZING

Oh have I been waiting for this

So beautifully written.

Unlock my heart in that sentence is a fragment .-.

"Turn off the ellipses Gill." XD

Gilgamesh xD

So many amazing one liners!

Hyperventalaughter. Just... This is so ;-; amazing

"In all his soaked glory." There are so many chuckle worthy phrases in here xD

Decided to go back and reread everything. Your style of writing absolutely blows me away. I'm breaking my commenting rule simply because of well there are like 60 more chapters xD I forgot how emotional this really was.

Oh, my chest hurts now. Like.. Bad ;-; oh Gill... That was a great twist of emotions right there.

And damn, are you on a roll today xD

Wha? WHAT HAPPENS NEXT? Dont do this to me ;-;

I really love your Angela. She's so spunky xD

Awwwww she's trying to get him to talk to edge isn't she! Good he needs to edge is so lonely I feel really bad for him, I think he is the cutest yet saddest of them all.

A cliffhanger?! Why would you do this to me! Lol.