Reviews for Mind Over Matter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "It had to be pretty damn amazing" Well ya he is Alex Rider This is a very good story May the Three Friends smile upon your path |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Idiots to ignore the warning |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good! I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, poor naive trainees. Will they never learn to stop digging for info on Alex? But I did like the bit about the Zen monks. Good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this one too! Really like how you explained instinctive shooting, always wanted to know the step-by-step process. Keep writing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story. I LOVE it. You are an amazingly good writer of one-shots. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmm? When did this come out? How did I miss this for an entire month? :) Wonderful job. Alex with an implied happy future always makes me smile. Though, really? You named a guy "Blades?" Furthermore, for a gun instructor? Haha, that name conjures up a really strange character image for me. Love the ending, and the little "get home before my own rabble are in bed." Made me chuckle like a madman! ~Pygmy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent and enjoyable story. Thanks for the read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. What a fantastic oneshot. I have not read one quite as good in a long while. I really enjoyed the end; especially the last line, genius. I will be sure to keep an eye out for any of your work in the future, this really made my day. Granted it is almost over considering the time, 11:30 pm, but still :) |
![]() ![]() love your stories, short and sweet w/ great plot and writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() great way to introduce Alex to everyone, it was nice to find out that he had kids of his own i like how we could recognise the things Alex was referring to but the recruits couldn't, it's just like Alex to leave people guessing XD nice :) |
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