Reviews for Fatal Flaw
Guest chapter 8 . 12/30/2018
I'm dying here to see an update, this is so good.
Guest chapter 8 . 10/29/2018
Please finish your story! I know it’s been a while, but I do love protective Uther and rarely see him in stories.

P.S. your story is good. Keep it up!
story magic chapter 8 . 7/31/2017
oh i hope more is coming for this, it is really good
Lya200 chapter 8 . 10/18/2016
I love Merlin whump just as much as the next person, but Arthur whump is SO much better. You must continue. Please!
CelestialWarrior chapter 8 . 4/11/2016
Ok, just found this story and read the whole thing in a few hours, only to get to this chapter and find to my horror that it ISN'T FINISHED! Please continue! I love this, so rare to find a WELL WRITTEN fanfiction with Arthur the one taking the punishment instead of Merlin. You must update, please, please, please...
Guest chapter 8 . 9/30/2015
Did you quit? Because I really love this story.
Zoge Hetai chapter 8 . 7/5/2015
Well done. Please continue
r1234 chapter 8 . 4/13/2015
Good job!
Smile or else chapter 8 . 10/6/2014
Update? Please?
GhostofaSaint chapter 8 . 5/22/2014
Omgosh this is so good! Come back and continue! Please!
not paranoid enough chapter 8 . 2/16/2014
I hope this isn't abandoned! Arthur whump is hard to come by-especially the kind where Arthur's also protecting Merlin while its happening :D
GingahNinjah chapter 8 . 11/16/2013
I COMMAND YOU TO UPDATE
I'm really enjoying this :)
Hermyone94 chapter 8 . 11/2/2013
Please, please continue this story! It's really good!
It's the first story I read that had Arthur tortured instead of Merlin, which makes it really interesting.
I also love your portrayal of Uther, especially showing his soft and caring side for Arthur.
I'm glad help is on the way, but it's really going to be bad when Uther finds his son tortured...
I can't wait to read the rest! :-)
Aerist chapter 8 . 10/1/2013
Great story , really intresting way to do it most are with merlin getting tortured coz we do love to put our warlock through pain this time it's Arthur poor Arthur and poor merlin he's not taking this well he would much prefer to take the pain and torture than watch Arthur suffer it can't wait for the next up date - uther and sir Leon to the rescue
Starkid191 chapter 8 . 9/17/2013
AAAAAAAGGGFHGGGGGHHHHHYYYYAAAAYYYYWWWWHHHYYY

So should I be happy or annoyed? BECAUSE YOU UPDATED YAAAAYY but then again SUPREME ANGST TIME AND LITERAL SALT IN WOUNDS WHAT COULD BE MORE FUN?!

So congrats on simultaneously making and ruining my day. Brilliant. And now I have school. Even better. I can do algebraic fractions whilst worrying about Arthur and Merlin. I can't wait.

(But nice Uther bit. I liked him. Which is more than I can usually say, especially after that series 5 episode with him. You need to watch it. )

(MERLIN HAS...)

(That will all make sense one day.)

(Okay, I've got to stop angsting now.)

(Bye.)

(But I want another chapter soon.)
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