I only recently discovered fan fiction. I keep coming back to this story and have read it many times. Love every bit of it. Tiva forever!

So wonderful and sweet!

This is amazing, I absolutely adored it! Ignore the people telling you to make your sentences longer and more meat in this because it was absolutely perfect! I loved the line: "He drunkenly asks for her hand and she soberly gives him the world." It was beautiful. Well done!

I read this months ago. I actually read it like six times, but I still don't think that was enough so there. Lucky number seven. Keep writing. You're good at it. My English teacher would be impressed. **Gives thumbs up**

LOL! I love it! Nice job! I like how their relationship gets more serious/closer as the number of times tony proposes. And love how u throw out zivas pregnant, :D

It was cute and I liked it, but you should try joining the sentences together to make them longer.

Awww great work!

That was amazing! I loved how with each time Tony asks Ziva to marry him their relationship progresses. Thank you for the post! :D

Ohh, sweet! Well done, and absolutely Ziva!

Sweet fic. Glad he got there in the end.

I think my fav proposal was the one at the restaurant :)

Loveddddddddddddd ittttttttt! :)

I enjoyed the fic. I would have liked more meat in there, though.