I love the story so far but one thing that kills me is that Bella has the right to cheat on Dean by kissing Jacob but he cant do what he wants? They're not even official and shes panting after two guys but is hurt by the fact he may or may not have had sex with someone. Btw you can refer to me as June if you reply to this review. Other than that, great story!

Why did u stop I'm devestated this was so good

Let bella keep her wolf abilities and add a few more if possible.

I thought Dean was her boyfriend but now Jacob is... But Bella was just sad when she thought Dean was "cheating" on her but she's cheating on Dean... What?

Hold up. shes sad about a girl in Dean's room when she keeps kissing jacob... technically shes cheating on dean... they arent even a thing technically

Can you PLEASE update your story? I have been waiting almost six months and I love this idea. The characters Beck, Dean, Jesse, Cole, and Carter are so realistic and creative I find myself wishing they were in the Twilight series. I am also dying to see Bella get back together with Dean and Jacob. If you don't want to write anymore, I understand, but at least let someone adopt the story, or tell us when you'll update. Don't leave me in the dark!

I think she should get her werewolf abilities back and I can't wait for more.

This was an amazing story so please update ut soon

Really good

Yes Bella should get her abilities back. I love this story and hope that you finish it. Great Job!

That was AMAZING but indeed more
Your a great writer but I NEED 2 see the end pppplllleeeeaaaassss

Your great
I always liked Victoria
Thank you for bringing that to perspective

Great jod

It's her real dad right

Yes he's gone