Reviews for Why Him? Hiei
Mrs.HatakePrime chapter 47 . 5/26
ohhhhhh love this! so hope you continue!
Irina Hunter chapter 12 . 6/1/2019
Would you be kind enough to pm me a link to the original story? I'm having trouble finding it.
RayvnAsh chapter 1 . 8/16/2018
Did ShadowLegacy11 delete her “Why Him?” story I have been looking for it and can’t find it. Reading your story is making me want to read hers again.
Layla347 chapter 47 . 5/16/2018
Love the story :)
wolfgurlaa chapter 47 . 2/27/2017
More please!
What chapter 46 . 12/10/2015
For fucks sakes Hope DOESNT ALWAYS HAVE TO KNOW HOW TO DO EVERY ATTACK AND EVERY LITTLE THING
What chapter 34 . 12/9/2015
You know Hope doesn't have to know EVERYTHING. She knows how to make the smoke even though KURAMA doesn't?! She knows the truth with shit she wasn't even there to see. She's a sue
What chapter 28 . 12/9/2015
Soooo Hope and Serina aren't actually related. Not by blood anyway since Hope is on Yusukes dads side of the family while Serina is on his moms side. Also Hope is a sue sorry. She has way too many powers and most of them are either Serinas or Inuyashas.
What the fuck chapter 16 . 12/8/2015
HOPE IS 13! WHY ARE YOU SEXUALIZING A CHILD?!
Amelia chapter 14 . 9/12/2014
I enjoyed it up until you added her cousin she doesn't have a purpose and is a Mary Sue also the writing definitely needs a beta!
Pixiecropse chapter 10 . 7/11/2014
okay this is getting annoyng a confusing now shes kyoto what the heck also why is it suddenly shes also the dragon demon princess when in an earlyer chapter it was refering to another person I am so confused
Pixiecropse chapter 8 . 7/11/2014
um whats with the serina that keeps popping up is it like hope real name and hope is her nickname
Guest chapter 4 . 4/30/2014
I can't believe I lasted this long...so OOC...I can't take it anymore
Audrey chapter 47 . 4/22/2014
Update please
Ground-Cinnamon chapter 4 . 4/20/2014
I like your oc and story because it's interesting. But Kurama would never curse like he did in this chapter, swearing is your oc's character trait so don't mix them up with other characters because it'll have less meaning when everyone is using curse words.
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