This story was well written but it is labeled romance \humor. I enjoyed the story though honestly I did not find it funny. If anything it just made me really sad. I would put this under romance\angst.

P(as in "Pre").S. - I didn't feel like logging in, I'm lazy and I bookmarked the story instead of favoriting (is that a word) it.

Love the writing, it's amazing. I know I'm late on reading it, as it's already done, but I do like it. Hope you see this. Keep it up, with this story or any other's. Try coming up with your own ideas, i.e. not fanfiction, and get a book PUBLISHED.

Whoaa! I'm satisfied with ending of this, just before the last part, where Ichigo interfered to save Toushiro from his own f**king father, it seemes that it's the bittersweet(or maybe happy?) endinf of this fic, and the last part kind of like a beginning of 'part 2' of the story, which has a sequel that I'm absolutely going to read :D! Actually I'm so extremely excited for it! Being more about IchiHitsu relationship, this one seemed more concentrating on only Toushiro and his life/family problems, not that I mind, of course! I loved this fic so much, gosh Toushiro's character is so fascinating in this **! The fic was so intense at times that it cut my heart to pieces, his life is so, so miserable : ( How can a father do that for his own son!? I hope there's no more of this masashi bastard -.-! I'm glad that at least his position as the mayor is destroyed : / And I've been wondering, where's Toushiro's mother? What does she think of all of this? Is she a LIL bit concerned about her own son?! Either you didn't mention her or I just didn't notice o.o Cuz at first when his parents didn't say anything about him staying in his grandmother's old house (like didn't try to take it from him) I thought they may still care a lil bate for his well being, or at least one of them and mostly should be the mother.
OH and I looove Matsumoto, Renji and Rukia's presence! I wanted to see more of them in the fic, and Hinamori of course! Even that Sakai guy, esp when it was revealed that he honestly loved Toushiro.. ouch ;.;
Ah anyway, well done with this gorgeous fic :DD! I love your fics and AUs! I'm going to read the sequel!

That was a pretty good chapter a lote of emotion and the kissing scence was disgribed pretty good. Most people mess up on a simple good job.

i don't know.
is it me that didn't had a taste of humor? or else...,
dispite the genre, i don't find humor in this fanfic...
but i find a few angst..., surely my tears is the prove that i don't find the humor...

So, after reading this and the sequel in one go - i couldn't bring myself to stop - here comes my review.

wow.
I absolutely fell in love with this badass personality that Toshiro displays. He's soo damn... wah.
He has that aura of a wild beast that actually only wants to be stroked into blissfull submission.
I fail to express what thought reading this... (i'm not a native speaker, so i might mess some things up here)

Actually your lemon in the story inspired me to an abstract piece of art...
Simply because you filled the words up with raw emotion to the brim and further! Few writers manage to do something like that to me!

But this wonderful tension between them... on one hand Toshiro is bossy and so damn cold about everything... and then, on the other hand he's that breakable boy that longs for a gentle man's touch.
You did a wonderful job on this.

Then all that mind-rape with Toshiro's father... wohow...
ouch.
I know how difficult it is to come up with such things, that are twisted and so on... so i know that you surely had a hard time doing that.
And you did it wonderfully.

I loved it!

Finally, I couldn't resist reading it, and you were right, when you read the entire story, it does sound like a happy ending ) I love it, I understand why it's the favorite in your poll It was great, really ! I love their banters D
PS : the smut scene was so hot ! *nosebleed*

This story reminded me a little bit of that song "Trouble" by Natalia Kills.

Anyway I absolutely loved every single part of this story from beginning to end especially Toshiro and Ichiho, their characters are so well rounded here, and the plot was really great too, it had it's fluffy moments and it's angsty but all around it was everything that I could've hoped for.

I can't wait to start reading the sequel (I'll get right on that tomorrow morning) and again amazing story thank you so much for writing it, 'Iridescent' is definitely a new favorite.

Rating: 8.3/10

Yours Sincerely,

GingersHaveSouls

you're amazing and the best queen! :)

i am sooo in love with this! An all time ichitsu favorite! The way that you've mixed everything was awesome :) i'm a big fan!

Thank you for writing such a fantastic story! I love it! Especially how the emotions are portrayed vividly. Splendid ending.

Bad ass Toshiro, and jack ass Masashi! Geez, that dude is one nasty father! I do like how Ichigo was apologizing after seeing the paper, and I hate that Jack Ass Hitsugaya hired Sakai to make Bad Ass Hitsugaya fall in love! I like how complicated you've made Hitsugaya! And an artist!? Yummy! Since he is now dating the famous guy who has taken over his cigarette packages he could ask him to have his face removed from his packages so he can go back to the original, I have a feeling that he's too stubborn to go back to them even when he's dating the guy. That would lift his mood... a bit...

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Haha, I laughed so much when I read the "Tim Burton" thing. In my family we always refer to him as the sick puppy.

I read this in one go because gods I couldn't stop reading when I first picked it up.

Thank you so much for the wonderful story! I've been meaning to read IchiHitsu again for quite some time and lo and behold! Your story sucked me in, really. I love how descriptive you are with Toushiro's emotions and how broken and beautiful he is in your fic. I've been deprived of drama lately, and you've just given me a healthy dose of it. Splendid, splendid! This will definitely be going to my favorites.