Reviews for She Hasn't Heard It Yet |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome ending! I really like this point of view :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good Story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, okay, I'm gonna be honest. This story left me sorta disappointed. /: I thought the language was dry and lacking. I mean, the story can be sad 'n stuff, but like, reading this, I'm barely seeing Sam at all. The loophole in this is: the fact that Sam is too air-headed to even notice Jackie's burning hatred for her stealing her man, sorta makes this literature hard to picture and less believable because she is a woman of confidence and could probably care less about what Miss Burkhart says, (unless it's detailed said/written). She's just so bubbly. Hyde on the other hand, I could see him leaving Sam with ease, no problem. But in all seriousness, I don't think it was that deep. |
![]() ![]() I liked it! I'm not a Sam fan so I enjoyed how things turned out in your little story. :) |