This is thoroughly interesting. I enjoy that you didn't go too into detail over Sakura's death and I enjoy that their first encounter isn't something totally unbelievable. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, whenever you've time.

god i wish you hadn’t left it a such a cliff hanger bugger i just realised just how long ago this was updated i'll probably never find out how it end boo hoo

this seems like an interesting story to bad IT ONLY HAS ONE CHAPTER you know, if you start a story make it interesting then you really have an obligation to FINISH IT!

This is going really well. I can just tell Sakura's character is gonna be developed really well and I can't wait for that :D You might want to explain if Sakura felt the shock too. But I really enjoyed this chapter :3

Oh, no way, you never continued it? Such a shame, I wanted to see where it was leading to :c It looked interesting, and... well, the shounen ai hadnt started yet and Sasuke's character looked so promising **

ahahah that seems promising! please continue and make it good :D