Great story a shame that you stopped it

That's too bad. Well, at least your reasons are justified. Make sure to update this with a list of anyone who adopts this so we can keep our eyes open, okay?

thats understandable

nice

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

it look interesting but to short for me taste _U

it was very good, but please make the chapters longer

hehe, it's a little short, but OKay.

P.S. So'unga is the only sword NOT forged by Inutaisho's fang, it's just that he was the only one who could resist So'unga's power.

good start, especially for a first fic :)

Only one suggestion, Try to "flesh" out your story a little more. This comes easier the more you write but it's good to try and develop it as early as possible.

P.S. by "flesh" I mean make things flow by giving detailed (but not TOO detailed) information leading to and following a character's actions. For example: You had Naruto cry after Yuki promised to stay with him. You could have had him tear up and tell her thank you because no one has ever promised to stand by him followed by him hugging her.

Just a little comment, hope you understand what I mean! If not, feel free to PM me!