Hmm...yeah... :). It's not really all that bad! You are descriptive, which is a good thing. Looking at this work, and then looking at your newest one must make you proud of how far you've come as a writer! The prose seems jostled, and there are some grammatical errors, but it kept my attention! I love this series.

The old Shinobi games have stories that are easy to follow, which leaves the character Joe Musashi left to wide speculation. That is to novelize him, but the way I see it, Joe Musashi is steadfast. Keeping this all in mind, I read the story.

I guess it was okay. Shinobi stories are rare and I am happy someone wrote what they experienced in gameplay such as this bad ending. I also find the Joe vs ZEED fight good since it was a game about revenge (so was PS2 game).

"Silent Night" is average.