loved it looking forward to reading your next story I haven't read. thanks for sharing your time and talents.

Enjoyed the story thanks

Beautiful! Amazingly beautiful!

Forget it being a day late or so

Your story. Do it right. Enjoy writing it

This story was well-written. It is very unabashedly HarryHermione from the first chapter to the end. It was a positive story despite an evil Dumbeldore and Snape and a mislead Minerva.

What a whirlwind! I love a Harry and Hermione pairing! This one was great!

aw man this is how the books should have gone! loved this so much thanks for sharing!

THIS MAD ARSEHOLE I AM REALLY STARTING TO HATE WITH A DEEP, BURNING, PASSION.

At least Ron's growing up...

Um, shouldn't Hermione's ring be able to protect her from things like this?
~Holly

This was truly a great read. Wonderful job.

Love the story, it’s well written and follows nicely. However, I can’t wrap my head around the premise. the more I think about it, the less it makes any sense.

Let’s change tge words “give up” and “magic”’to a comparison that is more digestible to a real world mind. Give up become rip out and magic becomes eyes. Or many cut off and arm, or shatter and spine. That is what is being discussed. He’s deliberately mutilating a part of himself.
For Most readers, and even for the first couple chapters myself, likely would look at going back to being a normal person as “well, it sucks but...” and that mindset is perfectly reasonable. For us, we live in the real world where magic is an esoteric concept on a page, not a real thing.
This isn’t the mindset someone who experience magic as a part of them. To these characters their magic is every bit as a real and vital a part of them as their ability to walk, grasp items or see. i find myself incapable of believing Harry is that desperate by the way he’s acting.
Still, a story I am enjoying reading and would recommend as it’s quite different than any other I’ve read. Would read again, most likely, once finished.

good

Brilliant

Great read noise little twists and turns always Thanks

Honestly, and I have no clue as to why, I LOVE stories that kind of redeem Fudge for his ineptitude in the books. I'm not even sure why, but I really like to read about a character like that truly growing, because unlike a lot of the HP universe's characters, he's not really light OR dark, he's just so weak and easily manipulated that he's no more than a tool for others. I like reading about a Fudge that realizes the times of peace are over, and even though he's terrified of what he'll face, and has no idea what to do, he decides he's going to try his damnedest to be the leader that people need. I really hope you continue to build Fudge up like this. Great story!

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[You are welcome to any of my ideas in any of your stories. My comments are just that comments. They are thoughts that occurred to me as I'm reading your story. I have lots of opinions on different aspects of Harry Potter Fan Fiction that I have 30 text files of expanded ideas. I love Good backwards in time, Dimensional Trunks, Portals and other useful magical items. With the right plot and character develment even Harry/Ginny stories can be good. She left it as an afterthought that makes it not work for me.]

ch1
father bit to help ne of them now.
(one)

ch2
handed it to Harrywas she finally
( was)

ch3

[You know I always wondered why a kid who saw people use the floo at the three broomsticks and has used the floo before, to not think about using the floo instead of the express. Especially when he doesn't want the attention on the express. That also applies to Hermione.]

The also supported Hermione's determination
(They)

[I really expected the Goblin to mention it instead of the kids about Harry being an adult. Another take on it could be that the Goblin find out that Harry didn't enter his name, intent is everything, thus they might have a test to see if Harry is actually under contract. I like the story where Barty Jr comes flying through the air to have to fight the dragon and goes crunch. Your take on it in Ch11 was good too. Though how the substition of Harry competing vs Barty's loss of magic is an interesting take.]

ch5

, wishing Harry a Merry Christmas.
[Shouldn't it be "Happy"]

[Dobby visiting Sirius just asks myself, why wouldn't Harry buy Sirius a magical tent for Christmas. It wasn't that long ago from the World Cup. Personally, if I was Harry and I knew how rotten it was for Sirius, I would have gotten him one and sent it to Remus at the start of the year.]

[Another item was that with Auror Tonks at the Grangers, I could just see Harry and/or Hermione writing the Tonks to invite them to Christmas dinner to be with their Daughter. I could see it occuring to Hermione's parents also.]

ch6

community to choke on their cornflakes that morning
[Shouldn't it be porridge?]

ch7

You're as we'll to get
(well)

ch8

looks like Ron's had his sweets.
(won't get)
[They went directly for Sirius, Dobby saves the Day for Ron]

effectively ruined his apatite far
(appetite)

ch10

Voldemort nder his supervision
(under)

Fluer's sister appeared about eight
(Fleur's)

followed by Fluer clutching

now full off Dobby's delicious scone
(of)

ch11

they planned on poisoning him,
(potioning)

before the ministry saught information on death eaters
(sought)

[My take on the housing issue is to move Grangers into the new house and vacate the old house. Albus might know the old address but not the new one.]

Molly had pubIcily made a fool of herself

ch12

there are some very god people looking
(good)

relationship every girl dreams off.
(of)

Hermione's room wasn't just as big as Harry's, it still contained a sofa
(wasn't as big... , though it)
[The "just" doesn't feel right to me.]

Watching Dobby stand their ready to protect
(there)

ch13

gives Mr Potter anything better than a fifty percent chance
[Your paragraph isn't really clear is it Hermione's idea that is 50% and all others lower, or another idea has 50% chance and her's is higher?]

and intelegence like that

ch15
[Knowledge is power is one of my favorites, it could use some work but nothing is perfect. Fettucini which is reposted by Defenstratable and DZ2 which had been deleted also wrote stories with that title.]

[I liked Tom's ending being stuck in the cave. I thought you ended it well with the time on the tropical beach. Having the friends join in would have extended it too long, our imaginations can take it from there.]