Beautiful story, diverse and short enough to get me to read 'til the end. Well done. :)

Well, the misused words here and there aside, I've got to say I loved this story.

It was distinctly pokemon, but at the same time, didn't try and be like the anime or the movies or the games.

It was its own distinct, intelligent exploration of a man put in a vulnerable position and his rescuer and how they grew together.

Everything about this, right down to Owen's angst and all the different characters was engaging and fun.

I wish there were more fics like this, quite honestly.

Hands down one of the best fics out there. The pacing was good, the romance felt natural, the grammar can be worked on, and overall a great story.

Also, can you make a (more graphic) sequel for this? Would like to see more of Owen and Amo's adventures. And is Owen supposed to be Prof Hawthorne from Pokemon Ethereal Gates (fan game currently in beta)?

PS: Nice 'adult-oriented' extra, mr author. Hats of to you

Hands down one of the best fics out there. The pacing was good, the romance felt natural, the grammar can be worked on, and overall a great story.

Also, can you make a sequel for this? Would like to see more of Owen and Amo's adventures. And is Owen supposed to be Prof Hawthorne from Pokemon Ethereal Gates (fan game still in beta)?

PS: The 'adult-oriented' extra was great, definetly one of the better ones *lenny face*

THE THIRD STORY I FEEL IS WORTH BEING A BOOK

AAAWWWW it's over! This story was really really great thank you so very much for writing it! :D

I freaking loved it good jop

I just finished reading the story, and i have to say i fell in love with the story the moment i reached 2nd chapter.
You made it seem rather lifelike and real, and i am honestly sad to see the story end here.

You did a great job with this story.

I loved this story! I hope to see more like it in the future! You write very well, and you build the personalities of the characters excellently! I also love the way you developed the relationship between Amo and Owen, it wasn't too fast and it had the perfect balance of cute and serious moments!

This was a pretty good story. I enjoyed it.

Read it a second time... Even better. Its amazing how many details you miss the first time.

Great story. I loved it.

You seem to be missing some pronouns. And articles. And just words in general. But other than that, good story!

I'm loving the story thus far, the pace is good and there's a nice coverage on detail.

But... I'm bothered by one little thing.

GRAMMAR! Holy sweet Jesus does my inner grammar-nazi want to SLAP YOU IN THE FACE! I'm not sure if my mind can tollerate much more.

This is a really nice fic. I adore Quark's character and the development between Owen and Amo with the gradual understandings and everything. And I'm glad they returned - it feels nice and complete.

-DdK